Hmm...my primary concern here isn't so much the typos, but rather some of the confusing grammar. I know it's not your best suit, so I'll let it pass. I do feel that it could've been a
bit more climactic and cliffhanger-ish. It caught my attention, though. You're definitely a lot better than when you first came to ZU.
Oh, and I don't expect you to answer, as this is a rather personal question... But do you have a variety of dyslexia? If so,
there are treatments for various forms of it. The treatments can be costly, but they would make writing a lot less stressful for you, since you wouldn't have as much trouble with grammar and spelling. Just a suggestion.