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Old 03-10-2007, 07:50 PM
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Re: [Power Shot] Stygi’s Training
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“Night’s coming soon, better…,”
Should be “Night’s coming soon, better…” The comma is not needed.

Fix. And always put things through a strict grammar check first before turning things in.
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Originally Posted by Anime_Queen, about Power Shot
[11:35:27 AM] Anime_Queen says: thing is,
[11:35:41 AM] Anime_Queen says: it IS unfair that all tehse ideas and vocal taents belong to the one person >.<
[11:35:48 AM] Anime_Queen says: quite unfortunate