Originally Posted by LadyElvenarcher

Okay, first of all, I think I'm tired of looking at that image. And some people on here are still on dial-up, and if they want to look at your profile, they'll never be able to see that image. So, ditch it and just write out the description or find a still image that close to what you want her to look like.

Next, that candy weakness has to go. That isn't an exploitable weakness in most situations. Most BA characters don't come equipped with Snickers bars.

And I still think your bio could be much better. There were several things that seemed totally random to me. Like, where'd the cat come from and what significance does it hold for her? Why was she comfortable having her demon wings if nobody in Kilika understood her? You need to fill in the gaps as much as possible, especially if you're going to through in random things like that.