Okay, now bad but this character needs some work.

First off, when you say thinks such as "Armor: Beginning" and "Armor: Middle to End," I'm assume you're saying he changes as the battle progresses. Could you please clarify that?

Second, you need to expand his Strength and Weakness section. In his strengths, how strong is he. Could he rip a tree out of the ground or is he simply a little stronger than normal humans? What about his intelligence? What does he know about? Is he a genius or just knows more than most people? His weaknesses really need work. Why are undead things and wolves his weakness? Would he die if one of them scratched him? Does he freeze up when he sees one? Please add more detail to those.

In his Magic, I would like you to explain what his Summoning power does, please.

Sukray's Personality also needs expansion. What would he do if he ran into someone who was killing other people or that he knew was bad? What if someone just attacked him for no reason? Please at least have a paragraph under the Personality section.

Finally, his story of parents getting killed/wanting revenge is bad cliche. Not to mention you need to go into more detail about his life. How did he grow up with his fake parents? What did they teach him? Did he know they weren't his real parents? Did Misukay teach him how to fight or did he knew about it on his own? Where did he demon form come from? Please try to go into detail about Sukray. Remember, this is his whole life you're describing.

Okay, edit those things and I'll take another look at him.

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