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Originally Posted by Ranarath
Not bad but you seem to have forgotten the Personality section. Also, could you go into more detail about what a Dragoon is? Just work on those two things and I'll take another look at him.  |
Yup, I completely forgot about personnality because I skipped it and planned to do it after I do the other stuff, but I never came back to it. I filled the section, and gave more details about what a Dragoon is.