
12-19-2006, 09:40 PM
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Re: Guardian Devil
The descriptions were excellent. Really magnificent describing of everything. That is, personally, what made this chapter great. It was also a superb transition from the prologue. While I don't know how you have planned this out, from the sequence of the prologue and this chapter, I can tell it will be wonderfully transitioned.
Two thumbs up. :]
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