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Old 12-10-2006, 01:52 AM
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Re: Destiny's Lament: Culmination

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Originally Posted by Jayolorin View Post
Oh. My. Fracking. God.

*asplode*

This is,quite possibly, the best fic i have ever read Rivalling Bloodsword's or Awbri's for that matter. I usually found your writing quite nice, though, to tell the truth, slightly lacking in some departments. Otherwise it was quite enjoyable and you portrayed emotions clearly and fluently.

This is a whole new level; the detail is outstanding, and as if you are a ghost standing right next to the protagonists (no pun intended. ) I could almost feel the emotion coming from the characters.

This is clearly of publishing level.
I don't know about publishing level, but I did have inspiration from an outside source. This, of course, is only the prologue. I have great plans for this fic, but you'll have to wait a bit. CMoC2 and RIP must both be complete before I can unveil the rest. Believe me when I say it will be awesome.
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