Oh. My. Fracking. God.
*asplode*
This is,quite possibly, the best fic i have ever read Rivalling Bloodsword's or Awbri's for that matter. I usually found your writing quite nice, though, to tell the truth, slightly lacking in some departments. Otherwise it was quite enjoyable and you portrayed emotions clearly and fluently.
This is a whole new level; the detail is outstanding, and as if you are a ghost standing right next to the protagonists (no pun intended.
) I could almost feel the emotion coming from the characters.
This is clearly of publishing level.