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Old 12-02-2006, 06:29 PM
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Cio: New AND Improved

Yesh, the title makes no sense... Especially when if it is improved it obviously can't be new... Still, I only have a couple things to show, seeing as I can't scan anything new with this computer. Newest to oldest. More will come eventually. :3



This is the cover to my sketching book. I was really bored. XD Oh, and the shading got screwed up when I scanned it.



This is Fish's character, Pentlo... Rough draft.



I was bored so I redrew my character, Gloria. Old pic, but meh.

Comments are welcome, but you get a penguin for telling me for how I can improve. :O
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Old 12-02-2006, 10:57 PM
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Re: Cio: New AND Improved

You are still the awesomest at drawing penguins. Fish must be ecstatic. :3

And noticing in your last pic, her lower body doesn't seem to match with her upper. Once you're done, look over your picture and see if what you've drawn is proportional and stuff. That helps me.
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Old 12-02-2006, 11:05 PM
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Re: Cio: New AND Improved

Yay! Some new pictures of yours. It's nice to see that you still have kept on with drawing, I'm very glad you are. You're good, and seems like you take comments and critisizm very well.

You did good at making the wings on the last one look folded at the ends, but now try making them a little less stiff, and it'll really make it nice.

Your penguin is adorable! Ha, very cute. Your work makes me smile...and think ... not evil things ...
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Old 12-02-2006, 11:18 PM
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Re: Cio: New AND Improved

I can definitely see an improvement.

Hopefully, we can get Iroas' hiney in here, so he can give you some real art advice. (trust me, I'm not good with advice, but I will try XD) And 'sides, he's the expert, not me.

Mm'kay. Now for my advice. I can see you are into drawing eyes. Well, perhaps you might wanna try putting the glare inside the pupil. My art teacher once said that putting a light glare in the pupil is necessary for if you want that eye to look alive. Because when people die, that glare goes away. The eye is no longer reflective, and it won't have that little light reflection anymore.

The penguin is just darling <3

Soo.. no advice on that one. ^^

And for the last one, err... I just don't see how both the wings can be going in the same direction. I mean, they are both curling the same way. (Unless you wanted them like that, then I don't really see anything wrong with it.) Your proportions are getting better... much better. However, there is always room for improvement. Oh, and you might want to make some room to put her feet next time. It kinda leaves you wanting to see them, but they just aren't there.

I can't see Gloria right now, I am on my crappy, old computer >> So that will have to wait til Monday.

But other than that, I am quite impressed! (And jealous XD) You are getting better, and I can't wait to see more of your stuff.

Nice work, Cio. ^^
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Old 12-03-2006, 02:10 AM
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You are still the awesomest at drawing penguins. Fish must be ecstatic. :3

And noticing in your last pic, her lower body doesn't seem to match with her upper. Once you're done, look over your picture and see if what you've drawn is proportional and stuff. That helps me.
Thanks ^^ And, yeah... I noticed that too, though it was a tad bit too late. XD And thanks for the advice, much appreciated.

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Yay! Some new pictures of yours. It's nice to see that you still have kept on with drawing, I'm very glad you are. You're good, and seems like you take comments and critisizm very well.

You did good at making the wings on the last one look folded at the ends, but now try making them a little less stiff, and it'll really make it nice.

Your penguin is adorable! Ha, very cute. Your work makes me smile...and think ... not evil things ... :look:
Okay, will do ^^ I'm glad they make you think not evily... XD

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I can definitely see an improvement.

Hopefully, we can get Iroas' hiney in here, so he can give you some real art advice. (trust me, I'm not good with advice, but I will try XD) And 'sides, he's the expert, not me.

Mm'kay. Now for my advice. I can see you are into drawing eyes. Well, perhaps you might wanna try putting the glare inside the pupil. My art teacher once said that putting a light glare in the pupil is necessary for if you want that eye to look alive. Because when people die, that glare goes away. The eye is no longer reflective, and it won't have that little light reflection anymore.

The penguin is just darling <3

Soo.. no advice on that one. ^^

And for the last one, err... I just don't see how both the wings can be going in the same direction. I mean, they are both curling the same way. (Unless you wanted them like that, then I don't really see anything wrong with it.) Your proportions are getting better... much better. However, there is always room for improvement. Oh, and you might want to make some room to put her feet next time. It kinda leaves you wanting to see them, but they just aren't there.

I can't see Gloria right now, I am on my crappy, old computer >> So that will have to wait til Monday.

But other than that, I am quite impressed! (And jealous XD) You are getting better, and I can't wait to see more of your stuff.

Nice work, Cio. ^^
Thanks Kellie, you rock. :3 I love your advice, gracias big sista! :D

Oh, and if you can comment on her wings, than you can probably see Gloria. :]

EDIT: Oh, and I forgot to do this yesterday, but for all the advice, you all deserve penguins!

*give super, ultra, awesome penguins to Sarah, DQ, and Kellie* :3
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Old 12-05-2006, 10:56 AM
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I dug that out of my mailbox. Its Cio's artwork, so I thought I might put it in here.
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Old 12-06-2006, 11:57 PM
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Re: Cio: New AND Improved

Aww... You still have that PM? o.o

You rock! ^^

More art!? You know it. :3







Um... Not much to say expect that I tried to scan them while they were in my sketch book... Which is probably why they look so distorted. XD
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Old 12-07-2006, 12:32 AM
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*Me likes the arts* <3 You should draw some stuff for me sometime...I have many requests....IN fact..<< *decides to ask for one sometime* : D I love your drawing, Cio. Penguins are cute, and your faces are wonderful, like I said.
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Old 12-07-2006, 12:49 AM
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*Me likes the arts* <3 You should draw some stuff for me sometime...I have many requests....IN fact..<< *decides to ask for one sometime* : D I love your drawing, Cio. Penguins are cute, and your faces are wonderful, like I said.
Aww... Thankies. ^^;;;;;

I'd love to do your requestsssss... =D

Penguins rock my sockz. O____O

*looks at all of her socks*

Pst... They don't really rock... They just move around a little... but don't tell no one. ;]

Oh, and speaking of requests... Those people who I owe requests to, you know who you are, I'll have those finished up soonish. XD
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Old 12-09-2006, 03:35 AM
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Re: Cio: New AND Improved

Awww, the penguins rule the world of cuteness ^_^.

The one with the eyes and stuffs I really like, it's abnormally awesome... if that makes sense x3.
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Old 12-09-2006, 03:51 AM
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Your artwork is quite wonderful, Cio! I can see how much you've improved since past endeavours, and your new pics are nice, clean and original.

Your penguin pics are pretty awsome as well. :XD
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Old 12-09-2006, 12:31 PM
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Awww, the penguins rule the world of cuteness ^_^.

The one with the eyes and stuffs I really like, it's abnormally awesome... if that makes sense x3.
Thanks ^^;; Penguins just embody awesomeness AND cuteness...

Abnormally awesome?! That's like the first time anyone's ever told me that... *wipes tear*

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Your artwork is quite wonderful, Cio! I can see how much you've improved since past endeavours, and your new pics are nice, clean and original.

Your penguin pics are pretty awsome as well. :XD
XD Gracias... I've been definitely trying to improve. Must get better! Penguin, penguin, penguin... Woah, I sort of zoned out there.
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Old 12-09-2006, 12:39 PM
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Where to begin? Oooh, I know!

*Ahem*

First of all, you're penguins are adorable! *Huggles*
Secondly, you are very skilled. *Nods* I'm serial. The way you drew those eyes in the first picture, they're really, really good.

Your second post of pictures are incredible. The expressions were just right, and the skill was amazing. You portrayed the feelings of each expression very, very well.

Now, here's the best part. You're only thirteen, which means that your skills will keep on improving, isn't that great?! *Huggles Cio* Just remember your friends when you're rich and famous!
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Old 12-09-2006, 12:45 PM
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Where to begin? Oooh, I know!

*Ahem*

First of all, you're penguins are adorable! *Huggles*
Secondly, you are very skilled. *Nods* I'm serial. The way you drew those eyes in the first picture, they're really, really good.

Your second post of pictures are incredible. The expressions were just right, and the skill was amazing. You portrayed the feelings of each expression very, very well.

Now, here's the best part. You're only thirteen, which means that your skills will keep on improving, isn't that great?! *Huggles Cio* Just remember your friends when you're rich and famous!
XDDDD That's great! *is huggled* I'll remember you all!

'Cept you.

*points randomly*

You know what you did...

Anyway, thankies for the nice words... ^^
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