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Old 11-30-2006, 12:17 PM
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Re: Gracie's Inner Workings

Think, Dream Believe: I loved it. The words express the theme flawlessly. The words flow from each little title to the next very well, making it easy to read. I like the ending. I think this one is perfect.
Motive: Another favorite of mine. The idea really speaks to me. I am always annoyed when people don't know why they do anything. The writing is short to the point. Good job on this one.
Photographic: The story this one tells is moving. It shows reality more than your others. I ended up feeling for both characters, to the point I hardly noticed the writing itself. Which was superb.

I really like all of your poetry, not just those that I have mentioned. They all seem to find a way to make you think. A very good quality. I hope to read more.
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