I absolutely love your dialogue--it is very conversational, not the slightest bit overstated (as is always fitting to my fancy), and it captures the period in which you have set your story most fittingly! And the setting--the setting is magnificent! Your descriptions of Agora and the Sound are executed wonderfully, spaced perfectly, and they never once distract from what is happening to the characters. I am most impressed, as I always am with your work.

Keep it up, my dear, and you'll turn out a real chef d'oeuvre!

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