I've only read the first section, and the lesser half of the second, but this is quite an engaging read, if I may say so myself. Given especially the short span over which you've written this, it is a very polished piece, with very vivid descriptions, particularly of the Sound, and very dimensional characters (Aunt Ignes, most specifically). Keep up the spectacular work, my dear, and this will continue to captivate, I'm sure!

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