So far, I find this one of your more complex stories to date - then again, I haven't kept up everything you's written (it's a goal, though! =P), and the preponderance of names and titles already present in "Legacy's Dawn" perhaps gives me this impression of complexity. All three installments have been a fun read, and having mentioned names, I must add that your method of beginning with each primary character's name is a capital one - I like Tobias's and Kor's appellations especially. They fit the atmosphere of your story very well. (I have to blink whenever I come to Ne Ella's name, as I keep forgetting both words formulate one name.) I liked the conciseness of Xander's history in Part One, the descriptions of Two, and the peculiarities in Three. Fine work! ::sits back in expectation of Part Four:: =D