Link Gets lost!

This is my first sprite comic, with sprites by SemiJuggallo on TSR! much credit!

Anyways this comic may suck but please tell me some tricks of the trade(if there really are any).





***NOTE*** When there is lots of dialogue, navi's text is red, link's will be green and narrator will be blue. New issue coming soon! may contain traces of peanuts***END NOTE***

Wow!, You have a great comedy pleasure on these!! I really want to see the next one.
Improvments needed : darken the colors, take the fuzziness off, No Jpeg.
Good THINGS: Comedy, and other things I'm to dumb to figure out. >.<

Really good. good luck with the next. my favorite part was when he said, " I like cake "
and confused the Dessert with Dezert. Lolz

Well first off, you saved it as a jpg. NO, no, no. And you used homemade backgrounds. Also a no-no. Other than that, it's a pretty good comic. 7/10.

It's small, .jpg, you used Paint premade pallete and it's not funny at all.
1/10 because you actually managed to use sprites.

Link is too young for-
never mind. I liked it, and you get points for not using the same background EVERYONE else does. Why was it bad to touch the master sword? Hmmm...

eeeeeeewww, jpg..save it as a .PNG for better quality and the sanity of everyone here

Originally Posted by GoldStud

Link is too young for-
never mind. I liked it, and you get points for not using the same background EVERYONE else does. Why was it bad to touch the master sword? Hmmm...

Navi thaught link would get pissed if he got old 'cause he likes being 10

Originally Posted by Tasogare

It's small, .jpg, you used Paint premade pallete and it's not funny at all.
1/10 because you actually managed to use sprites.

First of all, you're not supposed to be that harsh on beginners. Second, Thats as big as i could get it, third i saved it as a jpg by accigent and finally, you must have zero sense of humor, because everyone else thinks it's funny.

And by the way... What's wrong with paint's default pallette?

Very funny. But, try to make the text bigger. 3/5

HERE IT IS, WHAT YOU'VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR.... NO. 2!!!!!





yea boi!!!

finally in actually good quality!

haha, funny!!! Fairy urine. wow, now that i think about it, fairies have to Pee sometime. But you said link had elf ears, he's a Hyrulian.

Eww, Poor Link had to drink that! But it was funny and much better qualite!

Sick. Twisted. Funny! Way to not use a JPEG. I liked the Fairy Targeting Computer at the beginning.

Another hilariuos edition. 4/5. Fairy urine.