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The Olden Daze
Yep, I decided to make a webcomic! I'll try to post a new comic every day. To make the comics, I basically just take old paintings and pictures and add new stuff to them. I hope that you kind of like the comics.
![]() Painting from http://www.koreanarchery.org/oldpics.html
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Re: The Olden Daze
The idea is unique but it's kind of weird but since this is your first, I can't say if it's good or bad.
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Re: The Olden Daze
You should probably have speech bubbles or have the words outside of the picture, or something, because its a little awkward to read. As soon as you get your humor down pat, you will have very good comics! This is like those 1-liner comics in the newspaper, a very sturdy kind of comic. I'm glad somebody is trying it. It's not exactly a sprite comic, but you could make it into one fairly easily... I'll stop talking now.
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Re: The Olden Daze
Well first you need your humour and grammar checked. Plus the red text doesn't make it any easy to see. Anyone can add text to a picture to make people laugh, but it just isn't working for me. So I say you should have a little more practice first. Because 'Why do woman always wash right next to busy paths?' does not make sense.
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